We are just putting the final touches to a new joining form for Flutewise (excellent design by Andy) but we are struggling with a sentence – which do you prefer:
1. Have you heard what Flutewise members enjoy?
2. Psst! You mean no one told you what Flutewise members enjoy?
3. What! You mean no-one told you how Flutewise members enjoy themselves?
One of those or something different? Please answer as soon as you can!!!!
Thank you.
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2. Psst! You mean no one told you what Flutewise members enjoy?
3. What! You mean no-one told you how Flutewise members enjoy themselves?”
Are you serious? They are ghey.
I’d say 1
Thomas
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So what should we say??????????
I don’t really know but i’d want something like…
If you want to know what Flutewise members love so much, join up and find out!
How’s that?
If not – i like 2
Ellie xex